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…showed last 75 words of 416 total…good facts and metaphors that relate to common people. She had complete thoughts and her opinion was clear from the beginning. She somewhat discussed the other side of the issue but would quickly discredit it. The essay kept my interest and was not cluttered with unnecessary details. It was not too long and not too short, she established her opinion and got on with it. Overall, I feel as though it was a well-written essay.